Chapter four
During this chapter, Tita is cooking a meal for Roberto's baptism. Roberto is Pedro and Rosaura's new son. While Tita was cooking, Pedro came in and they had a moment with which their love became stronger. Tita had to help Rosaura give birth because no doctor was in sight. She remembered what Nacha had said so she used that to carry out the process of birth. Rosaura becomes very sick and it was very risky that she gave birth to Pedro. She was very swollen and had gained sixety-five pounds during her pregnancy. She wasn't able to produce milk for her son but Tita was able to. Tita fed Roberto in secret but Pedro knew about it. Mama Elena thinks it would be a good idea to for Rosaura, Pedro and Roberto to move to San Antonio. She claims that she thinks it would be better for Rosaura's health but really she wants Pedro to be away from Tita. She senses a special connection between the tow of them.
This entry touches down on several of the important events in the chapter and in turn paints a pretty good picture of what exactly happens here, how ever it could be a bit more specific in places. One of the things that could be done is to go into deeper detail about certain events that might be slightly more important than others, like the event with Tita and Pedro in the kitchen; what happened in there that caused their love for each other to grow stronger? It might also be a good idea to touch down a little bit on the deep connection that was developing between Tita and Roberto since that was a pretty big part of the chapter, and also how Tita was able to feed him. What was the recipe for this chapter? Since this book has a lot to do with food it might be a good idea to talk about the chapter's recipe, also was you symbol present in this chapter? Even if it wasn't it might be a good idea to mention if it was or not. Also as a side note, at the very end it says "tow" instead of "two". Just thought I'd point that out in case no one noticed it.
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